Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Gone Wrong

Man be crazy
gone
Tried to leave me
gone
Tried to walk out
gone 
Poor fool
gone
I shot him dead
gone
Kept that sucker's head
gone
He ain't leavin' now
he gone




The prompt is 33 words about love gone wrong.  Without using these words: love, sad, tears, wept, heart, or pain. Pretty much the lyrics of every country song ever.  I decided upon a blues vibe, which isn't always depressing.
love
sad
tears
wept
heart
pain
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17 comments:

  1. KirFebruary 11, 2014 at 6:44 AM

    it's pieces like this that I love most from you. You have the Vim and passion (*and the crazy*) to make it all fit together.

    (he deserved it!)
    hope you're having a good week

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  2. kymmFebruary 11, 2014 at 10:30 AM

    This is crazy good, Tina!

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  3. Shailaja VFebruary 11, 2014 at 11:25 AM

    Very interesting :)

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  4. GinaFebruary 11, 2014 at 11:44 AM

    You do the dark and crazy GOOD, Tina! My favorite stuff from you comes from that place you go...

    Excellent!!!!!!

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  5. Valerie BoersmaFebruary 11, 2014 at 12:10 PM

    Revenge. Done. Right.

    This is crazy good, Tina!

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  6. AndreaFebruary 11, 2014 at 1:59 PM

    Well alrighty then!!!! ;)

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  7. glynis rankinFebruary 11, 2014 at 2:55 PM

    Yep, he gone! I loved this craziness! Great write!

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  8. JuliFebruary 11, 2014 at 7:17 PM

    And now she's doing 20-life...

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2014 at 8:29 PM

    I love the bluesy spin - I almost heard Dinah Washington singing this one!

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  10. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2014 at 9:38 PM

    This is great! I think they've both got the crazy going on :)

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  11. Ashley KagaoanFebruary 13, 2014 at 11:10 AM

    Love the repetition. It really works in this piece. Great work!

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  12. TrifectaFebruary 13, 2014 at 12:30 PM

    Is this bad that this made me laugh? I can imagine this being strummed in some blues bar. Nice write! Thanks for sharing! Voting opens soon, don't forget...

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  13. Michelle StanleyFebruary 13, 2014 at 4:44 PM

    I love the wit and the cleverly crafted words. It flows with a lively pace I like...guess that's because he's gone.

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  14. DraugFebruary 14, 2014 at 10:02 AM

    This is excellent! hahaha!

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  15. brudbergFebruary 14, 2014 at 1:40 PM

    Of course you kept the bones... couldn't be anything wrong in a love like that...or?

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  16. IvyFebruary 15, 2014 at 12:09 AM

    I am so gone over this! ;) Loved the sassiness and the lyrical flow. Fantastic job!

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  17. AnonymousFebruary 16, 2014 at 3:04 PM

    Oh Tina this is awesome. Wow.

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