Saturday, November 9, 2013

Syncope

Suddenly, in the pantheon
Syncope, goddess
of insensibility,
stood up.

She wanted respect,
so long neglected, but
she was overcome by
somnolence and fell
into the arms of
an inebriated Dionysus.
As usual.




Buddhist cosmology tells of Trāyastriṃśa, or the Heaven of Thirty-Three gods, which rule over the human realm.  This weekend we're asking for exactly 33 of your own words about a god of your own devising that shares heaven with the other thirty-two gods.  Make it yours and have fun with it. - See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.ISEOh2Wx.dpuf

13 comments:

  1. Oh! Very well pictured- the scene of Pantheon. And good characterization. :-)
    -HA

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  2. Haha! As usual. Love it! :D

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  3. Extra sauce indeed! Seems I fancied myself a similar misguided goddess at one point or another. ;)

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  4. That dang Dionysus, always with the ladies falling in his lap, or general lap-ish area...

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  5. Oh dear! Poor Syncope. Love your take on the prompt! :D

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  6. You created a wonderful scene, such vivid imagery.

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  7. Ha! Sounds like a typical office party.... :)

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  8. Of course I have to love her.
    That last line knocked me to the floor.

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  9. Haha! She's gonna hate herself in the morning. :)

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