Their glorious charge up San Juan Hill.
That battle lost a century ago.
Teddy is long dead.
It sounds so real,
yet
Remy sees all
on the perpetual TV
In his head.
This weekend we're asking for exactly 33 of your own words plus the following three words:
- charge
- century
- lost
So 33 of yours plus 3 of ours means that everyone will have a 36 word response this time around.
I swear I am trying this one of these days! Love seeing your creativity every week!
ReplyDeleteYou totally should! It is so much fun, and you would be great!
DeleteMy grandfather was in that battle. his version was a little different than the history books.
ReplyDeleteNice use of the prompt words!
ReplyDeletewe tried something similar. The stories in our heads are more entertaining. well done, Tina.
ReplyDeletePerpetual TV sounds awesome. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI'm sure he wishes he can change the channel sometimes. Good work with the prompt words.
ReplyDeleteThanks for linking up!
Nicely done! Those 33 words go so fast, don't they?
ReplyDeleteYes, and they are not always cooperative.
DeleteI like this one. That tv in his head. Well put! :)
ReplyDeleteHow much more entertaining must Remy's TV be!!
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ReplyDeleteThe individual perspective, and the 'perpetual TV in his head' made this a very touching piece.
ReplyDeleteI'm seeing a movie loop repeating going on and on! You are so incredibly creative, Tina!
ReplyDeleteIt's certainly compelling, memory as TV loop. Poor Remy though. Great post.
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