Wednesday, September 2, 2015

Not A Metaphor

From the blackest
corner
of my room,
comes just
the faintest sigh,
a quiet exhalation.
A strange coldness
crawls over my skin
as I lay there,
the stench
of funeral flowers
encircling me.

He swore
that death
would not
ever separate
us.


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11 comments:

  1. Ann BennettSeptember 2, 2015 at 8:21 PM

    I read this earlier. Verrrry Creepy haunting.

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  2. UnknownSeptember 3, 2015 at 6:06 AM

    Wild!

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  3. Eilidh ThainSeptember 3, 2015 at 7:03 AM

    An eerie little tale! Great take on the ultimate question! TiV

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  4. kalpana solsiSeptember 3, 2015 at 7:12 AM

    I admit its a bit spòoky.

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  5. AndreaSeptember 3, 2015 at 8:02 AM

    Yikes!

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  6. Whispering ThoughtsSeptember 3, 2015 at 9:48 AM

    This is very powerful and very haunting

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  7. Whispering ThoughtsSeptember 3, 2015 at 9:49 AM

    This is very powerful and very haunting

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  8. CathySeptember 3, 2015 at 12:15 PM

    Chilling!

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  9. UnknownSeptember 4, 2015 at 11:12 AM

    Very creepy. I love creepy! Loved this. But ew. I don't want ghosts in my bedroom.

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  10. Red Nomad OZSeptember 6, 2015 at 3:30 AM

    You've still got the juice, girlfriend!

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