Saturday, May 18, 2013

Revolution

It's time.

Time to

Step off this loop

We've called our lives.

Let's

Pour honey on the gears,

Shift this paradigm

Off the axis, and

Topple the old gods

Who've led us astray.





On to the weekend prompt.  This weekend we are asking for exactly 33 words, 30 of your own and three of the following:

topple     paradigm     underneath     nerve     honey     loop

I used four, sorry.
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17 comments:

  1. katie eggemanMay 18, 2013 at 9:28 AM

    Don't be sorry, your leading the revolt, use all the words if you want to...I am right there with you!
    Katie atBankerchick Scratchings

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    1. TMWHickmanMay 19, 2013 at 9:19 AM

      I thought about using them all, but I didn't want to be too revolutionary!

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  2. DraugMay 18, 2013 at 11:46 AM

    Revolutions can be fun, but they can backfire too. Better be careful!

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    1. TMWHickmanMay 19, 2013 at 9:21 AM

      Revolutionaries, by their nature, are not known for caution, but I will try.

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  3. UnknownMay 18, 2013 at 11:51 AM

    I love feeling that impulse, thanks for capturing it so well

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  4. PurpleMooseMay 18, 2013 at 3:00 PM

    fist in the air, flowers in the hair, which side do I take? :) Great job!

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  5. Ann BennettMay 18, 2013 at 4:26 PM

    It only happens a few times in your life but this sums it up well.

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  6. kymmMay 18, 2013 at 5:03 PM

    Amen to that! Count me in.

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    1. TMWHickmanMay 19, 2013 at 9:23 AM

      That is what I like about you--always willing to join the party!

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  7. UnknownMay 18, 2013 at 7:57 PM

    Sounds like some people are ready for Catching Fire!

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  8. AnonymousMay 19, 2013 at 12:52 AM

    This is the battle cry! I like the pouring honey on the gears...that's gonna be a mess when it dries :)

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  9. AtreyeeMay 19, 2013 at 2:58 PM

    Wonderful piece and I loved the last two lines-yes,do let's topple the Gods who led us
    astray:-)

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  10. allmylivesnowMay 19, 2013 at 4:26 PM

    Change is the only thing that stays the same. I like it!

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  11. TrifectaMay 19, 2013 at 9:57 PM

    Things can only get messy what with honey and revolutions. Great piece.

    Thanks for linking up!

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  12. NinaOctober 9, 2018 at 7:04 PM

    Revelation I love reading your statements. At such a high level.

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