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Saturday, February 2, 2013

Why I Have So Many Headaches



Prompt:  For the weekend prompt we're asking for exactly 33 words of dialogue.
Good luck and have a great weekend!  


"Do you have the money or not?"

"It's in the envelope."

"Hey! This is only half of what you owe me."

"You didn't kill him. You get the other half when you do."
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27 comments:

  1. BoFebruary 2, 2013 at 6:57 AM

    This made me laugh. I'm not sure why because it was about murder and all. Maybe that should tell you what kind of mood I'm in today.

    I really did enjoy this one.

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  2. lumdog2012February 2, 2013 at 1:04 PM

    You have headaches because your hit men/women demand 100% payment up front? I guess it's a common problem. Interesting and real dialogue!

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  3. AtreyeeFebruary 2, 2013 at 1:26 PM

    Well,he/she has half the money without getting blood on his/her hands-so why bother?lol!Great plot & in 33 words through cool dialogue-awesome!:-)

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  4. UnknownFebruary 2, 2013 at 2:00 PM

    I love the casualness behind this conversation.

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    1. TMWHickmanFebruary 3, 2013 at 12:17 PM

      My thought is that people who are willing to go this far would be very casual about it.

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  5. UnknownFebruary 2, 2013 at 6:45 PM

    The title just adds to the dialoge--great

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 2, 2013 at 10:41 PM

    Well, geez, I think our minds work along the same lines. Well done.

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  7. AzaraFebruary 2, 2013 at 11:07 PM

    Ooh, I love it!!

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 2, 2013 at 11:34 PM

    Hahaha - this is great! (Please tell me this is fiction and not borrowed from personal experience :grin:)

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  9. DraugFebruary 3, 2013 at 7:51 AM

    Duh, creepy assassin. Don't you know how these things work? (:

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  10. christinaFebruary 3, 2013 at 7:58 AM

    oooh snap. :)

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  11. AnonymousFebruary 3, 2013 at 12:51 PM

    They are lucky they are getting half!

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  12. PurpleMooseFebruary 3, 2013 at 4:15 PM

    and how do I know that you won't just kill ME and take back the first half? Hmmmmm?????

    :)

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  13. ReneeFebruary 3, 2013 at 4:39 PM

    I'm not sure it works well with that sort, shorting them up front. Gutsy move, and nice dialogue. :-)

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  14. AnonymousFebruary 3, 2013 at 6:03 PM

    Great take on the prompt! A good freelancer should know they only get the full fee when they deliver their full services! ;)

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  15. TrifectaFebruary 3, 2013 at 8:06 PM

    So much death this weekend! I kinda love it.

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  16. AnonymousFebruary 3, 2013 at 10:48 PM

    Nice! I would watch this movie. :)

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  17. SandraFebruary 4, 2013 at 2:00 AM

    Oh I smell mafia!

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