Trifextra prompt: This weekend we are giving you three variations on a prompt. We need
you to give us 33 words back, and 2 of those words must be either "cheap
flights," "sandwiched in" or "spectacularly clean." This weekend, your
piece must also be non-fiction (poetry or prose). And yes, we reserve the right to call your mothers and former lovers to ask for verification on your tales. You should call my husband--he often complains that I'm not listening when I mentally check out.
Sandwiched in between
Work, school, soccer games, and
The umpteenth trip to
Whatever store, are
My 'cheap flights',
Moments or two
That might find me
Padding silently
Through vegetation
In search of prey.
Love this!
ReplyDeleteI love the ending. In search of prey. Nice.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThis so sounds like mt email inbox. :)
ReplyDeleteMine, too, matter of fact...
DeletePad silently, always! Whenever you can.
ReplyDeleteGood advice!
DeleteSounds like a busy life (:
ReplyDeleteAnd people have called me sedentary.
Deletesearch of prey - perfect
ReplyDeleteThose moments are awesome and so is this 33
They are pretty awesome!
DeleteThis describes my life.
ReplyDeleteYou are probably three times as busy--I only have one child to chase after!
DeleteVery nice - THe busyness is so well described.
ReplyDeleteVery well done ... I've got some great mental images going on now! Whether you intended them or not!!
ReplyDeleteHeheh--no comment...
DeleteThose hectic days of school and sports were exhausting. A few minutes to yourself are definitely a needed break.
ReplyDeleteMoments or two. Need those badly most days. Grab them when you can and pad silently!
ReplyDeleteThis indeed gave me a laugh. I needed it I have been watching TV about the school in Conn.
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